You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about the college. Write a letter explaining about the college and giving your recommendations. Include following
- why did you apply for admission to this college
- what do you like and dislike about it
- would you recommend this college to your frnd. Why?
Dear Mayra,
I trust you must be doing well. I'm delighted to know about your prospective study in the same college as mine. I hope this information would serve you best.
Patel memorial college always make endeavours to excel at all courses that are offered for both domestic and international students. It is one of the prominent and autonomous college in nearby area. Therefore, i decided to get my MBA degree from this highly reputed educational institution and i feel proud on my this decision.
It offers a wide range of courses in distinct fields like as medical, engineering, business, travel tourism and so forth. I really admire the fact that this college has equal emphasis on theory and practical aspects. It's constant attempt towards excellence is commendable. Moreover, the complaints, suggestions and problems of students are prioritized by this college.
It would be a pleasure to have you my college. I'm cocksure that you will accomplish your dreams some day being a part of this institution. It'll be a chance for you to explore yourself with international students in an excellent learning environment. Ofcourse ,you must stay with me in my hostel don't worry about it.I really hope you can make it.
Take care and write back soon
Regards Angelina
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ayra, I trust you must be doing well. Im delighted to know about your prospectiv...
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...mous college in nearby area. Therefore, i decided to get my MBA degree from this ...
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...hly reputed educational institution and i feel proud on my this decision. It ...
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...rds excellence is commendable. Moreover, the complaints, suggestions and problems...
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...d be a pleasure to have you my college. Im cocksure that you will accomplish your ...
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...excellent learning environment. Ofcourse ,you must stay with me in my hostel dont ...
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...rse ,you must stay with me in my hostel dont worry about it.I really hope you can ma...
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...ith me in my hostel dont worry about it.I really hope you can make it. Take car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, i feel, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06161137441 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83910386746 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3121537781 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31111957967 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912086401679 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612005016748 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152182852024 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103431512019 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.