Dear Mr. Lee,
I hope all is good with you. I’m writing this letter to seek your permission to get some time off from work in order to complete my master degree in Data Science technology. I would like to take time off for about 3 months to complete my examinations and thesis. I have to submit my thesis to university by end of July30. Unfortunately, I have already utilized my annual leaves and sick leaves. My current leave balance will not help me to finish my thesis. So, I need few days off from my work.
In return, I would endeavor to come into office as early as possible and I will try to complete all my project or pending work. If needed I’m willing to stretch my hours and I will also work on Saturday’s. I have already spoken with my collogues Mr. Nanda & Mr. Sahu and they are willing to support the project in my absence.
My absence can affect in project deliverables, but in long run my thesis will help the organization. My thesis is mostly pointed on new technologies and upcoming trends in Data Science technology. It will also point on how can we archive old techniques and leverage more on new technologies. This will give us a competitive edge.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...us a competitive edge. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Sudhe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63436123348 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79125232934 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7592579895 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217327066327 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738632480128 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753325372717 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987761446616 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940885012113 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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