You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Hello Rahul,
This is Tina from photography department. I am writing this letter to seek your help on the accommodation facilities granted to me. I am very disappointed with the hospitality granted by your organisation.
I am not getting hot water in my room. It is difficult to take bath in cold water daily. My health will be seriously affected if i take bath in cold water, because i am not used to it. I did made a complaint about it to hospitality department, unfortunately it never helped me. The checklist which was shown to me during my admission had a point on hot water availability. I was pleased with it before i joined the college. It is a big trouble for me every morning to fetch water from my neighbor room.
It would be great if you can arrange geyser facility in my room. Also, you can educate your hospitality department staffs to respond well to students queries. I would expect your help at the earliest. I hope my problem will be resolved by you.
Looking forward to hear back from you.
Thanks,
Tina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ality granted by your organisation. I am not getting hot water in my room. It...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...My health will be seriously affected if i take bath in cold water, because i am n...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d if i take bath in cold water, because i am not used to it. I did made a complai...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ter, because i am not used to it. I did made a complaint about it to hospitality dep...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me. The checklist which was shown to me during my admission had a point on hot w...
^^
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ilability. I was pleased with it before i joined the college. It is a big trouble...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...l be resolved by you. Looking forward to hear back from you. Thanks, Tina
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61081081081 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83820332267 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8676967922 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.8666666667 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11863970959 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407416692416 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434186448108 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775124588241 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496169675026 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.