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You are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week. But you have not finished it.Write a letter to your lecturer. in your letterIntroduce yourselfExplain why you have not handed in the projects yetRequest more time to

Essay topics: You are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week. But you have not finished it.

Write a letter to your lecturer. in your letter

Introduce yourself

Explain why you have not handed in the projects yet

Request more time to do it

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You are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week. But you have not finished it.

Write a letter to your lecturer. in your letter

Introduce yourself

Explain why you have not handed in the projects yet

Request more time to do it

Dear Sir

I am one of your third-year student majoring in “crisis management”. I was supposed to carry out a project by 18th July. The topic is “Importance of national first aid”. Unfortunately I haven’t meet the deadline which was last week. Due to some mismanagement.

First of all, the library had several reference book in this context, the books in other students’ possession and the library administrator promised to offer me one by making contact with students and notify them to return books they had borrowed. However after a week I realized that the books have been borrowed again by other student.after that I have some difficulties in collecting data, since I have to go on a field trip and visit some destroyed areas in last enormous earth quack, the faculty hasn’t issued any permission regarded with and they declare there is no guarantee to make arrangements before next week, hence last part of my dissertation is completely allocated to this data, I am hesitant whether I should postpone my project or not.

I know how this delay would make discomfort for you, however I would like to ask you two extra weeks for completing my project in detail. Also I would be thankful if you lighten me whether I can replace the last part with data approached by questionnaire instead of field trip.

I have not meet the deadline which was last week, therefore I would like 2 extra week to complete and hand in. I look forward hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Sahar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... it. Write a letter to your lecturer. in your letter Introduce yourself Expl...
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Line 17, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in other students' possession and the library administrator promised to of...
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Line 17, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...them to return books they had borrowed. However after a week I realized that the books ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ks for completing my project in detail. Also I would be thankful if you lighten me w...
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Line 21, column 82, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...st week, therefore I would like 2 extra week to complete and hand in. I look forward...
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Line 23, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard hearing from you. Yours faithfully Sahar
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. Yours faithfully Sahar
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, third, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 306.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90522875817 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9421929979 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 290.88556701 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.113752659 44.8134815571 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439582024368 0.216113520407 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17098605088 0.0766984524023 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135306037477 0.0603063233224 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25737663511 0.12726935374 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208693168358 0.0580467560999 360% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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