You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter;Explain where you liveDescribe the problemGive reasons why you do not want

Essay topics:

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter;
Explain where you live
Describe the problem
Give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with the article that was published in your newspaper about the local airport, dated 21 June. I live in ABC Street that is located in the right corner of the airport. Developing the local airport can make some problems.

The first problem is the overcrowding which will be caused by the people who are communicating to the airport every day. Another serious problem is air pollution, because there are no parks in the vicinity to fresh the air. Furthermore, there are no recreational facilities in the area. In addition, increase in the number of flights will lead to noise pollution that would be disturbing for the neighbors.

These problems are serious; I hope you reflect them to the people who are in charge of the airport developing department.

Yours faithfully,
Rahi Honarvar

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08633093525 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81220435765 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647482014388 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9055162077 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22829897863 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796901761165 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595047196719 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134705665348 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813691447762 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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