You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having someproblems with the internet connection in your room.Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter Introduce yourself Inform him / her of the situation R

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Hariss, I am Paria Oloumi – a recent...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('recently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('arrival') instead of another adjective.
... I am Paria Oloumi – a recently arrival overseas student staying in Unit 5 of F...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...seas student staying in Unit 5 of Flower . While I have found all the facilities q...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... satisfactory thus far, I wish to lodge a complain about university's internet system...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...about university's internet system.According to student accommodation brochure, whic...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Considering
...pensive in comparison with online calls.Considering the high tuition fees we overseas stude...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e to communicate with loved ones at home .I was, therefore, wondering if you could...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...to communicate with loved ones at home .I was, therefore, wondering if you could ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74683544304 4.54256449028 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45886791538 2.54303337028 136% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.778481012658 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.133093125 44.8134815571 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183198055424 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744719645525 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053156663415 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115773153682 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177396730197 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 70.7449484536 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 8.71597938144 188% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 7.59969072165 140% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.