You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Manager, Daraz e-commerce,
I am writing to raise a formal complaint regarding the delivery service that your company has provided last week. Let me give you the details of the incident.
I have ordered Huggies diaper for my 2-year-old toddler from your company website on 16 november 2019 and I received the delivery on 20th november afternoon. The order number was BD845855778 and the amount I have paid cash on delivery which was BDT 1100.00. Basically, I have ordered the same brand which was made in Malaysia; however, I have received the product made in India which has a 20% lower market price in our country. Unfortunately, I came across this after opening the outer delivery carton of the company. Meanwhile, the delivery man has left my domicile and I could not return that on the spot. however, I did not open the main carton and it is in fresh condition.
In this circumstance, I would like to return the item and want an exact one which I ordered from your official website.
Sincerely yours
A T M Jakir Alam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 610, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nd I could not return that on the spot. however, I did not open the main carton and it ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81767955801 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63116870363 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.893165755 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170245224836 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633097531141 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368294748162 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816689029281 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680415775284 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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