Dear Noah,
I hope everything is fine with you and the recent conditions in university has got improved. I know you have two weeks holiday as I've heard from your mother.
Actually I am writing to offer you something very pleasant. I have recently buy a ticket for a concert of a very popular band. They have recently won an international prize. It will be held at weekends for 3 consecutive week at 6 pm. Actually it is possible to select the venue in advance as there are several choices. In fact it is impossible for me to attend the concert because of an unplanned mission. I was wondering if you want to go to the concert instead of me. I'm sure you would enjoy the time there as you are interested in music and are always more than willing for such events.
I send the handout to give extra information and also the website is mentioned on the paper in case you wanted to change the venue. Please do tell me about your decision, then I could send you the ticket as soon as possible.
best regards,
Pooneh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...d. I know you have two weeks holiday as Ive heard from your mother. Actually I ...
^^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bought'.
Suggestion: bought
...omething very pleasant. I have recently buy a ticket for a concert of a very popula...
^^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...l be held at weekends for 3 consecutive week at 6 pm. Actually it is possible to sel...
^^^^
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ant to go to the concert instead of me. Im sure you would enjoy the time there as ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...you the ticket as soon as possible. best regards, Pooneh
^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t as soon as possible. best regards, Pooneh
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47619047619 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50602700061 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7959563236 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0769230769 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276157591657 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844633636487 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727764771125 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179278450061 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00667796217667 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.