You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops. Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following: 1) Give the details of book you need 2) Why you need it? 3) How will you pay for it?

Essay topics:

You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops.

Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following:

1) Give the details of book you need

2) Why you need it?

3) How will you pay for it?

Dear Arora,

I am writing to you the letter to enquire about the possibility of arranging a book on priority basis. Allow me to elaborate.

I have been running from pillar to post for a book titled as “Criminal Manual 2018 – Amendments and Procedure”. Further, I had visited a book store based out in Orlando and the store manager told me to get in touch with your company as you deal in books that are short on supply or rare to find.

In addition, I am in dire need of the book as I have recently received a new brief in a high profile criminal case and the same is listed for 4th July 2018. It would take me about a week to study the book. As such, I hope to receive it maximum by 25th June 2018 which will provide me with ample time.

Furthermore, I am willing to pay the price of the book and also some extra money for going an extra mile to arrange the book. I will remit the money in your bank account or immediately transfer to your Paytm account.

I hope to hear positive news from your end.

Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.325 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46592274818 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6651623671 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304785733851 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941440659207 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787744720169 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150213415328 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814368047786 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.