You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it describe the meal you had and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting You should write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write your

Essay topics:

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:

To the Editor,

My name is Nilesh Kolhe, I am a foreign resident in Kuwait since last October. I am writing this letter to you, regarding my visit to the local restaurant last weekend with my family.

I would like to draw your attention to your famous Naif restaurant at Bharatpur junction. Last weekend when I visited the restaurant with my family, we observed the way of representation of Arabic culture is amazing and eye-catching. The food we ate was pure Arabic food made of meat and jalapenos with strawberry flavour and it is locally called Indmat. The most important thing about the food was the smell of meat and flavour of strawberry was mixed and it was mouth watering when served on the table. My family had praised me for the food choice and I wish the restaurant should become through your source.
Furthermore, I would suggest every non-Arabian should try this dish to understand the pure taste of Arabic food.

Finally, I would request you to have an article on this restaurant and the food they served over there and lastly, I must say the restaurant visit is worth and I will plan to go again soon.

Thank you in anticipation.

Yours faithfully.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...worth and I will plan to go again soon. Thank you in anticipation. Yours fait...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, lastly, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76585365854 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6528513837 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7024177706 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226465918689 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906650051023 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823658704401 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129611110772 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652474554481 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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