You have been offered a job, asking you to start next week. You want the job very much but, because of a previous commitment, you want to delay the start for another two weeks.
Write to the Manager, accepting the job, but explaining your situation and asking for the change to your start date.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for the delay in joining my job for another two weeks.
I am honoured that your organisation IDFC Mutual Funds has considered me a suitable candidate for the position of senior manager. I am very excited to join your organisation as it shall help in enhancing my skills, expertise and knowledge and aid me in developing a successful professional career.
The date of my joining was from 1st of September, however, because of some prior commitments, I shall not be able to start my work from the aforementioned date. Since I am working as an assistant manager in McKinney company, my senior has requested me to work for extra one week in order to train the new employee appointed on my place and to hand over all the task and duties to him properly.
I shall be highly obliged if you could allow men to start my work in your company from 11th of September.
I hope you will understand my situation and grant me the approval for the delay in starting with my services.I apologise for the inconvenience that has been caused and I will ascertain you won't have to face any issues because of me in the future.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ate for the position of senior manager. I am very excited to join your organisati...
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Line 11, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... the delay in starting with my services.I apologise for the inconvenience that ha...
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Line 11, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the delay in starting with my services.I apologise for the inconvenience that ha...
^
Line 11, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... any issues because of me in the future.I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 11, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... any issues because of me in the future.I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67264573991 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77331692641 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3319202967 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222537711882 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941582850556 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786818091929 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135173152146 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793503016698 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.