Dear Sneh,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. You remember, you lent me your beautiful shrug for my sister's wedding party. Unfortunately, it got abrasions and I would like to apologize for that.
It was so kind of you to lend me that shrug instantly, after realized my desire to bought a similar one. The shrug complemented my dress so well that I got a lot of compliments on party occasion. Alas, I devastate your shrug by mistakenly. It so happened that we were all dancing on the dance floor and suddenly tassels on the shrug muddled in my shoe heel and I heard a loud ripping noise. My heart skipped a beat when I saw the shrug torn from middle completely. I did my best to get it darned from professional, but the tear is still visible.
Please forgive me for this. I would be happy to buy you a new shrug. Please let me know where you bought it from, so that I can buy that similar to this from there. I hope new one will be as awesome as the old one.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
With love
Kiran
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25853658537 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43582228829 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0265886152 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165413795788 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556033086077 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053952609706 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111072484763 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047586178704 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.