Dear sir or madam,
I am constrained to write to approach you for seeking urgent help in dire circumstances which are looming over my head. Allow me to elaborate.
I am a student of Bachelors programme at Downtown campus. I am staying nearby in Vauxhall Apartment. I have rented a two bedroom apartment till December, 2019. In addition, the apartment has 2 separate bathrooms and a kitchen. Moreover, the house is a fully furnished one.
I am unable to meet out the expenses of rent. I had a part-time job till last month. However, I lost that job as well. As such, now I am not in a position to pay off the rent on my own. Initially, I was staying with a senior, but he has graduated this fall. Further, I cannot ask my parents for financial assistance because there are financial crisis going on with them. I do not wish to create any burden on them.
Laconically, I am looking for someone to share the rent equally and further willing to stay for a long period of time. Further, I am looking for someone who is a student in the university itself, more into studies and looking for a calm place to reside in a budget of about $350 per head.
I would feel elated if you can help me at the time of need.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m staying nearby in Vauxhall Apartment. I have rented a two bedroom apartment til...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2019'.
Suggestion: December 2019
...ave rented a two bedroom apartment till December, 2019. In addition, the apartment has 2 separ...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... and further willing to stay for a long period of time. Further, I am looking for someone who ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41991341991 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64262224582 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4391232718 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.7222222222 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146141320349 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431790099092 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474946783362 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072317128991 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258082168414 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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