You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not buy

Essay topics:

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself.

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir,

I am David, I have an account in your bank and recently got a credit card issued worth Rs. 1 million. I have received a bank statement for the month of September while going through the transaction details; I have noticed two oddly expensive transactions worth rs. 20,000 and 12,000 respectively. Both amounts are charged for some product purchase from an online store and the amount is deducted in dollars. these transactions turned out to be so prominent from the card statement as I had never bought anything from that particular website.

First of all, I would like you to raise my dispute with your relevant investigation team and ask them to register a complaint against these disputed purchases. please ask one of the representatives to call me and explain how my credit card is being utilized online; moreover, identify the location where the card has been used from. The card is in my custody and I am sure someone has hacked my card details and did online purchasing. please share the turned around time for the resolution of this complaint at your earliest possibility.

Looking forward to your outright response.

Yours Truly,

David

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...card details and did online purchasing. please share the turned around time for the re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0306122449 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76185868398 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2507760723 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231228651795 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066989318484 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404706563624 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114201636896 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585827451183 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.