You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,
I am a premium customer of your bank and have been satisfied with the excellent customer services of your bank. The purpose of penning down this letter is to inform you about the loss of my credit card. Let me explain in detail.

To elucidate the incident happened yesterday when I went out for shopping in the city-centre area. As you are aware that the festive season is around the corner, therefore, most of the shopping areas are crowded hence yesterday while shopping someone pickpocketed me. Although I didn’t realize it at once as I was busy in shopping and eventually found about it only when I had to pay money to the shop keeper. Therefore I immediately called one of your customer care executives to block my credit card as I was afraid of someone misusing it.

Lastly, I request you to cancel my old credit card immediately and issue a new card as I need to use it for shopping as the festive season is around the corner.
Looking forward to your response and immediate help.
Yours sincerely
Saad

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a premium customer of your bank and...
^^^
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... I had to pay money to the shop keeper. Therefore I immediately called one of your custom...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se and immediate help. Yours sincerely Saad
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, lastly, look, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67759562842 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59107452118 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.916107471 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290037028446 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10589551768 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914880196072 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182129783431 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10715779868 0.0580467560999 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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