You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,
I am a premium customer associated with your bank and have been using both banking as well as investment services. The reason for penning down this letter is to inform you of the loss of my credit card. Let me explain in detail.

To elucidate the incident happened in a shopping mall yesterday when I went with my wife to buy grocery items. Since the shopping complex was heavily crowded due to the ongoing festive reason I believe someone stole my wallet in the crowd. Although I am not certain about the actual place of occurrence of this incident as I was buy buying items however I think it was definitely in the grocery shop someone pickpocket me. The wallet contained some cash, personal items like identity card, driver’s license as well as my credit card. After this incident I tried to check with the shop owners about my wallet however I was unable to find it.

Additionally, I called your customer care immediately to block my credit card as I wanted to prevent the unauthorized use of the credit card. Lastly, I request you to cancel my card ending with 0198 and issue a new card as soon as possible as I use a credit card regularly for my daily transactions.
Looking forward to your response and immediate resolution.
Yours sincerely
Saad

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...r bank and have been using both banking as well as investment services. The reason for pen...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...went with my wife to buy grocery items. Since the shopping complex was heavily crowde...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...of occurrence of this incident as I was buy buying items however I think it was def...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, look, so, well, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62203389154 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.408610915 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266240629273 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099795693379 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974544377609 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174852118191 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119104599009 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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