You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Igor,

I hope the letter find you in the best of health. As you know, I have been going from pillar to post for the purposes of house hunting. I have a good new to share. Allow me to elaborate.

As you know, I and Miranda are expecting our second child. Further, we were somehow managing living in a basement for a significant time period. However, the crime rate in the area had started rampantly increasing and it was a daily routine to hear rounds of firing in the neighborhood. I had started fearing for the safety of my family. As a result, we decided to move away from there.

Furthermore, now we have taken an independent house in Rose Avenue. I can say that it is one of the safest areas of the city. Moreover, I feel that the house is a cheap deal considering it has 5 bedrooms and 7 bathrooms for a throw away price. We are happy with the investment. I can see raising our children in the present house with ample playing space and independent rooms for their own privacy.

We are all settled in the new house and would really love to have you over for dinner next week. A surprise awaits you. Let me know your plan.

Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, i feel, you know, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37899543379 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4606576806 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0188565156 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.2777777778 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209586631972 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618575611262 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553414739417 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131948394651 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767539125013 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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