Dear Sir or Madam ;
I am writing this letter to express my interest in your recent advertisement in the local magazine. I am living in Australia since two years ago and I am a study child care at National University, I am very interested to take care of children because they are very innocent and smart especially at age 6. Although I am a study in university, I have lots of free time to spend with your children, so I can help your children to learn science subject, in addition, I have experience in working with children because I am used to be a kindergarten teacher and I know how to take care of them.
However, I am a student in university but this semester I have free time to work on my proposal so spending time with your kid could be a wonderful experience for both of us. And I have just two classes this semester so I can stay with your children five days a week.
I would be grateful if you accept me in your family.
I am waiting for your answer.
sincerely yours
Sogol Hassani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...e in working with children because I am used to be a kindergarten teacher and I know how t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sincerely
...amily. I am waiting for your answer. sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting for your answer. sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30158730159 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66374551453 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4352825243 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13377231369 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725777936894 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333534313532 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10168340578 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246300641921 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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