Dear Mr and Mrs Anderson,
I am writing for the advertisement on hiring a Cantonese language teacher posted in LinkedIn on 20 September 2020. I am Samuel, a native speaker of Cantonese who live in Hong Kong would like to apply for the job.
It is rarely found a post on Cantonese language teacher in Australia. Cantonese is a totally different language, in both grammar and the pronunciation from English. As Cantonese is my mother tongue and used every day, I know everything of Cantonese, from the sentence structure, accent, idioms and even the latest gag that you and your children may want to learn. Furthermore, I am a graduate on childhood education diploma certificate, I am sure my teaching would not be boring and full of fun. The youngsters should enjoy the learning.
From my experience, the teaching may start from what is the Cantonese on some commonly used words in your daily living. It could attract the child’s interest and the curiosity. After that, we may try to learn some simple sentences like greeting and thank you. Cantonese is quite difficult in writing for foreigners and this part would be done around 1 month later.
I am very excited on apply this job as this match my final year project on how to teach the foreign students on Cantonese. I am sure my ability and skill should let your children learn Cantonese in a happy atmosphere.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Samuel Tse
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arn Cantonese in a happy atmosphere. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.832 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74481620514 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3089161977 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233095607174 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736736193548 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04613934111 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113853248221 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616022276666 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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