you need a recommendation letter from your former university teacher
Dear Mr. Ahmed,
This is Karim Farhan, one of your students at Helwan University. If you do not remember me, you were the supervisor of my graduation project. I need a detailed recommendation letter with your signature.
Firstly, I am planning to continue my postgraduate degree in Canada, and I want your assistance to write a recommendation letter to Toronto University that will help me a lot in getting the scholarship.
Secondly, the statement should have my academic record and work experience. Although I graduated 7 years ago, I have been working in the field for 5 years only. Thus, I want you to mention that because I have already sent my details to the concerned officer.
Finally, if I get the acceptance, I will stay in Canada for 5 years to get the doctoral then I will return to Egypt to start my professional career in teaching, but under your supervision.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and your rapid action is highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
Karim Farhan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93604651163 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02242273853 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4592071451 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258529094114 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102138256274 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985824114435 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136388266258 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953292610117 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.