You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter:
- give the details of the party
- the reason why the party was so successful
- mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear sir,
I am articulating this epistle to express my delight for excellent service and the high quality of food that your hotel provided us last night, on the occasion of my grandfather’s 90th birthday.
The party was celebrated on December 25th at the Grand View Hotel and had a gathering of nearly 100 elderly guests. Although, I made the booking request at the last hour but your staff was kind enough to entertain my request. The party was organized in the beautiful rose garden nearby Roman Pond.
Firstly, the arrangements were immaculate and every detail was taken care with precision. The minimalist decor of lavender and roses with warmth of bonfire provided additional comfort. Furthermore, all the guests were appreciating the quality of food especially dessert was outstanding.
Finally, I would like to mention a special thank to one of your server Mr. Dave who helped me to put up a slide show because I really struggled with it and my computer did not want to show it on-screen.
I am so grateful to you and your courteous staff for being so co-operative and would surely recommend your hotel to all my dear ones.
Yours faithfully,
Milan Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0351758794 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85218268826 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1262646908 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188543884103 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652396674077 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555163926413 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886247251625 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533909869469 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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