You recently bought some food at a supermarket but when you got home you found that the food was in bad condition Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket in your letter explain what happened to you give details of the day and time of the purchase

Essay topics:

You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket, in your letter,
- explain what happened to you
- give details of the day and time of the purchase
- ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experience.

Dear Sir,

I am XYZ, one of the regular customers of your supermarket. I am writing this letter in order to lodge a complaint about the deteriorating quality of product purchased from your store with the expectation of proper solution.

I had shopped a monthly groceries from your store on 10th April 2017 about at 6:00 PM. My shopping was included three three containers of ready to eat chicken curry. When I opened the container to reheat the food owing to consume it on the same day, it was smelling contaminated grossly. I believe it must be got stale due to improper refrigeration in the store. The smell was so harsh that caused me nausea and vomiting, hence I had to discard the food immediately.

The first time, I am very disappointed with the quality of product purchased from your store. I would expect a prompt reply with the possible actions on my complaint. Here, I am enclosing the copy of a bill of my shopping for your kind perusal.

Thanking you,

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the expectation of proper solution. I had shopped a monthly groceries from yo...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'grocery'?
Suggestion: grocery
...er solution. I had shopped a monthly groceries from your store on 10th April 2017 abou...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: three
...ut at 6:00 PM. My shopping was included three three containers of ready to eat chicken curr...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...owing to consume it on the same day, it was smelling contaminated grossly. I believe it must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77714285714 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77473146338 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.513240589 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160772592669 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592560160523 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522690078804 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764243645072 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302151216292 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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