Hi Nishath,
I hope you are doing well and thank you for writing to me after a long time. I have received your recent mail about the guidelines to choose work or study for your future. Honestly, I would like to recommend you to pick the job as a priority for the best. As a reason, you mentioned that you are going to pursue a study in economics but currently all the companies are moving out of written-based documents. So, you might have faced trouble to get a job in that field.
Last time when we discussed the course which you were studying in computer technology. I believe you have completed it now. As per the current technical trends, most of the companies are prefer to use the software in order to maintain their taxes and all the stocks. I think, quest a job in the software field would really get you to a higher position. I know you are well versed in doing codes in a current client scripting language.
Moreover, 80% of software companies looking for a candidate who only having knowledge in coding scripts. Because now many software does not prefer to go for server patching.
I hope this would help you to relieve you from the dilemma mind.
Yours lovingly,
AshokG
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...nical trends, most of the companies are prefer to use the software in order to maintai...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...nowledge in coding scripts. Because now many software does not prefer to go for serv...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much software', 'a good deal of software'.
Suggestion: much software; a good deal of software
...nowledge in coding scripts. Because now many software does not prefer to go for server patchi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, look, moreover, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58139534884 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48872416549 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4551176647 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3571428571 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246341814478 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895067432251 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566735371198 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148533190575 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714314811349 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.