You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it. Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter, introduce yourself; explain what went wrong with the car you rented; ask for some form of compensation

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complaint on the service which you provided on car rental, I am Venkat and hired a Toyota Innova 2015 model car from your agency on 1st April. I am not satisfied with the services which you have provided as i faced lot of issues.

Being an rental agency, you have promised me to provide break down assistant across country 24/7. But, No one from your helpline answered my calls, I seek the help from local mechanic and get the repairs done. Similarly, Car jumping while shifting gears. In addition to it, Engine heating after driving 50 kilometres as there is no Coolent fluid. All this repairs led me to spend around 40,000 rupees and I took all original bills as i would like to compensate from you.

The service which you provided is not acceptable and kindly let me know the mode of payment how you're gonna pay, So that i will send account details to you. I will be waiting to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Venkat.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the services which you have provided as i faced lot of issues. Being an rental...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ided as i faced lot of issues. Being an rental agency, you have promised me to ...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rupees and I took all original bills as i would like to compensate from you. ...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...dly let me know the mode of payment how youre gonna pay, So that i will send account ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of payment how youre gonna pay, So that i will send account details to you. I wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54237288136 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26696631283 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683615819209 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9459070203 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236266268934 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841479912976 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566941645392 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155360207184 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655134985165 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.