You saw a car accident. Now you have been asked to write a report for the police describing the scene. Write an email to the police in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Explain when and where you saw the accident.
Describe the road conditions, what you saw, and how many people and vehicles were involved.
Explain who you feel was responsible and why.
Dear Sir/Mam,
I like to file a report against an accident that occurred yesterday during my presence on the Mall Road, GTB Nagar North Campus.
The accident happened around 6'o clock in the evening while I was crossing the road during the red light of my side. All the cars stopped except one car was trying to jump the red light, as a result, that one car got hit with another car on the crossroads.
The condition of the road was good and smooth, however, the reckless driving resulted the injuries of the driver who tried to jump the red light of the automobiles. During the evening, there was low-traffic on the road but there were many people present who were walking on the pedestrian roads at the time of their red light for vehicles.
I personally feel, it was the mistake of car driver who tried to jump the red light, and such situations happens due to shortage of time and urgency in reaching to destination. Besides, no other passengers or cars are responsible for this accident.
I believe the accident was caused by a reckless driver who tried to cross the red light.
Regards,
Shwatank
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69035532995 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4748262311 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3508676841 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063690836181 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03067728755 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226928202523 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044703624301 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213411571727 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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