You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Johnny,
I am Donna from your city writing today in gratitude to thankyou for your unselfish deeds and very proud that this world is a better place. Doctors at the hospital told me how gallant you were in pulling me out of the car wreckage and called for an ambulance.
More importantly, your presence at the hospital while I lay subconscious and the way a stranger took care of the hospital bills is impressing me. Acting like a family member and purchasing daily utilities during my infirm state is making me indebted. It took me four months to recover and finally understood that you are a guardian angel for offering your help like a good Samaritan. Words are not enough to praise a person like yourself.
Since recovery from trauma, I'm heartfully inviting you and your family to visit our family this weekend. This family will await your arrival with enthusiasm to meet a savior.
Yours Friendly,
Donna Gom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tranger took care of the hospital bills is impressing me. Acting like a family member and pur...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ourself. Since recovery from trauma, Im heartfully inviting you and your family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83125 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51643814498 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4377283801 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188426800225 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756093120208 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392129731143 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126544157238 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284265802578 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.