You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
* describe what the group does
* explain why the group is good for the community
* suggest alternative days and times for practice
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the prior received request to discontinue our music practice in the community hall.
I am the commencer of the group “ The local musicians”. Since the past year, we have been practicing music at the community hall on Tuesday and Friday evenings. The assembly of talented individuals is proved to be a great platform for budding artists and musicians. The upbeat atmosphere is increasingly gaining larger audiences, who are also getting well acquainted with the other services that the community hall offers.
There has been a substantial growth in the popularity of our group, amongst the localities. Due to this, the politicians of the area, have been pressurized to facilitate better roads and regularised cleanliness of the vicinity around the community hall. The group has also raised funds for the less fortunate and contributed its bit, by organizing awareness drives. This has played an important role in bringing business to the community hall banquets.
I suggest that a time slot from 4 pm- 6 pm on Saturday and Sunday can be reserved. This can be further discussed and mutually agreed upon. I hope we have your cooperation and utmost support in keeping the cheerful moment alive and going.
Yours Sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19811320755 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9077577581 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.902893358 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7692307692 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227940882103 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690132739451 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500655959061 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125101008302 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070729638899 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.