Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in connection to the advertisement posted in the local newspaper about the seminar held in Auckland. However, My name is John. Currently, I am working as Deputy Assitant in Mutual Funds of Association. I am a Canadian National and possessing a desire to attend the seminar. Therefore, I am seeking further missing information such as dates, program and accommodation.
Firstly, I want to know the dates and the time the seminar commences and ends. In addition to this, the hours required to attend the workshop. Secondly, the program schedules and course outline detailing each topic conducted while attending the seminar. Also, I would like to know the program offers practical implementations or based on theory.
Most Importantly, I would like to acquire details about accommodation. For example, nearby hotels, rooms or flats available for rent or accommodation arrangements are managed by yourself? These were the information missing in the newspaper I was looking to acquire. I would appreciate your efforts toward presenting all the required information.
I look forward to hearing from you soon concerning my interests.
Yours Faithfully,
John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44385026738 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16489906934 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2662870135 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247226625781 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636690450426 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415439426196 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122209550534 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359574488375 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 7.45979381443 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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