You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager.In your letter, you should tell:Who the person isHow did you know the personWorking experience of the person.Why do you recommend the person?

Essay topics:

You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager.
In your letter, you should tell:
Who the person is
How did you know the person
Working experience of the person.
Why do you recommend the person?

Dear Mr. Smith
I am writing to you in regards the letter number 345, which has subject an introducing a well-educated person to apply for head of the architectural designing section. I am willing to recommend Mr. Rezaei, whom I have known him for several years. Besides, Mr. Rezaei’s resume is compiled briefly and attached to this letter.
Mr. Rezaei and I familiarity is traced back to seventeen years ago when we meet each other in the university for the first time. Even though we were studied in a variety of major, our relationship keeps going on until the contemporary time.
Evident, his background experience shows that each firm he occupied a vacancy could be successful, albeit his age. In addition, he received an award from the best architect project competition in the previous year.
However, the primary reason considered me to introduce him is not only his creativities in designing but also his ability to operate as a team. For these reasons, I hope we could be a top college in the company.
I would appreciate it if you could arrange an appointment to have a friendly interview with him.
I look forward to your reply
Kind Regards
Erfan Mohammadi

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our reply Kind Regards Erfan Mohammadi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90049751244 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89519753354 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691542288557 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5184104668 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121713830175 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391021730184 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527866267548 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550084166889 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611855668136 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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