Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my writing is to draw your attention to the unsatisfactory facilities for elderly people in the museum.
Although I am an admirer of "Bihour Museum", it has modern architecture and its authentic beauty is unparallel. However, while my visit last week, with my office colleague "Sara Dekon", who is an enthusiastic sixty-two-year-old lady, she felt various issues while roaming around the edifice.
Firstly, the pathways were uneven, it was very difficult to walk over them even for young ones. Also, some staircases do not have proper railings for support and protection, which could lead to an accidental situation. Secondly, there were not enough benches for rest, where elders could take a breath and relax a bit before moving further. Lastly, not enough sign boards for directing visitors, it makes the trip confusing without proper guides who ask for money.
I suggest to, work over the maintenance of pathways and railings. Moreover, implementation of branches would be a big relief for the elderly even for other families. Addition of signboards can reduce the confusion among the visitors and make their visit a soothing and pleasant experience.
I am looking forward to hearing some optimistic actions from your side about this matter.
Your Faithfully,
Anna Mathew
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3981042654 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98975888013 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720379146919 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8997214883 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9166666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132352314382 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409994873466 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376791228213 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698000385097 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508053619511 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.