Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem I am facing, using the laptop provided by you.
Let me tell you in details. I am a part-time employee of your company and I work from home. My employment ID being E246P, the company provided me with a laptop and a WIFI gadget at the time of my joining that is a week back. Everything was good until yesterday when I tried to switch on my laptop and all I could see was a blank screen. Because of this, I am badly stuck and unable to do anything in it. I took it to the nearby vendor before bringing the matter in your notice but he said, the process to rectify the error will take at least two days. However, this way, assigned work will be affected badly.
Therefore, I would like to request you to please, either change my laptop or help me with a replacement of it till the time it will be worth using again so that the work can go smoothly.
I hope you will take this matter seriously and can initiate a quick response. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Neha
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30049261084 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28241013092 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8344481481 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226905321714 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789692490709 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503908714613 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136452466602 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558385671777 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.