Dear Mr. Smith ;
I am writing this letter to tell you about my new position in your company, as you aware I am working for your company for about six years in design department, and recently I got promoted to be a team manager in the international advertisement campaign. So that I decided to go to your head office in France for six months training courses that they have and also worked there for six months until my courses end well.
In addition, I am talked to my assistant Mrs. Maanavi to manage everything while I am in head office, she is a really responsible person that I can trust her and she is a great graphic designer, I absolutely believe in her ability to manage our project.
I am hoping if you are signing my application in order to I can start my courses in Paris which is necessary because they ask me provide your permission.
I am really appreciate to your consideration and waiting for your answer
sincerely yours
Sogol Hassani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
... provide your permission. I am really appreciate to your consideration and waiting for y...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsideration and waiting for your answer sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting for your answer sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5549132948 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74703024888 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7992958802 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333590538865 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149887633283 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126915830903 0.0603063233224 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174054639209 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156620407525 0.0580467560999 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.