Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include:
• Why you want to join the team
• What you can do to assist
• Queries related to the trip.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to nominate myself as a volunteer for the 3 days tour to Bangladesh if School is still looking for parents to accompany on the trip. Even my child is also a participant in this trip.
I am passionate about exploring different nations and their unique cultures, which, I believe, the best way to admire the diversity of traditions and natural heritage. In the past, I have organized such trips for my family and at work.
My past experience and my friends in Dhaka will come really handy in making arrangements for accommodation and food, which is a huge problem in this part of the world. I am a doctor by profession so I can provide medical assistance as well in case of emergencies. Besides, I am naturally good with children, which is very essential in children’s trip.
I would be really grateful if you can advise what sort of things are expected to bring as a freelancer. And, what is a mode of transportation from here to Dhaka, train or by flight?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... trips for my family and at work. My past experience and my friends in Dhaka will come reall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, so, still, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71502590674 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90729447033 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1515059965 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253290485942 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833407569702 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802146299976 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128297987982 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972572472322 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.