Your colleague loaned you a book to use in a presentation at work. Write to your friend to say:
What the presentation was about
Why it was important
How the book helped you
Dear Mike,
I am writing to express my gratitude for lending the book “Remote sensing and the environment” written by J. Johnson. As you remember, I was giving a presentation at the office concerning the latest technologies and usage of remote sensing data in oil spill assessment.
This presentation was significantly important for me because I was giving a speech not only in front of the manager staff but also in front of one of our major clients, Chevron oil company. In fact, the signing of a contract was at stake.
Thus, the book was a great help in the preparation of my presentation by providing a detailed description of the procedure of a site assessment following an oil spill event. That is why I was able to describe all the crucial moments of it to our customer.
Once again, thank you for your well-timed help.
Best regards,
Maria
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8255033557 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9919339638 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8413266481 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321899158516 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116126286408 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551253816505 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176879399126 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974859711229 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.