Your friend is in another country, write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
• why you want to work there
• what skills and work experience you have
• inquire benefits (salary and hours).
Dear Friend,
It’s been so long since our last call, hope everything is fine with you overseas. I am contacting you for some advice from your side, regarding work opportunities at your country.
As you know, the situation here is getting worse and messy. Companies are closing or removing their employees, and I’m searching to find a job in another country, where can I gain more experience and new challenges and move my family to a safe and secure place.
Additionally, as you know I have 7 years’ experience in the filed restaurants, I had several certified trainings locally and outside the country, with professional trainees and centers. I am right now the head manager of a high-class restaurant at the capital.
As I was job seeking the employment opportunities online, I’ve found that at your country there is a lot of chances to move and work there. The employee will receive high benefits such as, salaries paid hourly, low taxes and most important pension rules after retirement and the chance to get the citizenship.
I would like to know your advice, for such job opportunities in your country.
Waiting for your reply; and give my best to your family.
All the best,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87026035848 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5653551722 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336235690001 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116779371696 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105525397946 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165253684895 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076994973048 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.