Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.
Say why a driving license is advantageous
Recommend driving school
Give any extra guidance/tips
Hi Layla,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing this letter in response to your call last week to ask about my advice for obtaining a driving license.
First of all, I am glad to know that you have finally decided to drive by yourself rather than depending on public transport all the time. Having a license would allow you to drive legally in the city, and it would reduce your expenses tremendously. For example, you could ask the transportation officer in school to cancel the pick and drop facility of your kids and could save a handsome amount out of it while dropping your children by yourself to school as it's on your way. As you are aware of the strictness to obtain a driving license in Dubai; therefore, taking admission to a reputable driving school is highly advisable. I would suggest you visit Belhasa school for training as they have new vehicles, large area to practice, and experienced instructors who will put their energy to make you successful in the final road test with the police inspector.
Finally, I would suggest you be confident on the test day, give indicators while taking right and left, and keep a reasonable distance from the vehicle in front of you as the police officer would have a close eye on these points, and give the final decision to you.
I hope, the advice above would be helpful for you to move the matter forward.
If you still need any additional information, please call me back on my mobile no. to talk in detail.
Your friend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 863, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al road test with the police inspector. Finally, I would suggest you be confiden...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70037453184 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49362834606 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.002213511 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204979863669 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100461915913 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109997545533 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769034138671 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826095746669 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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