Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in a voluntary work in your hospital which was advertised on 29th June in a local newspaper name "The Ahmadabad Mirror".
To begin with, I have been long concerned for underprivileged patients who are unable to get proper medical treatments because of lack of money. So, I always wanted to contribute to society in the form of social works. Thereby, I believe this is the best way to help poor people.
As per my work, I am running pharmacy in well-reputed corporate hospital whereby I have in-depth knowledge of medicines. As a result, I would be able to aid in translating jargons for medically illiterate. Also, I would be able to help patients in substitute generic medicines to curb the cost of prescription drugs.
With respect to advertisement, I would be available in my leisure time which is in afternoon 1.00PM to 4.00PM in weekdays, and if this time-slot is not free, I would be able to work in weekends as well. As my medical store is closed in this time, I would be available for a full day.
I would be grateful if you respond at your earliest convenience. Please coordinate on +91-8527276721 for any details.
Yours sincerely,
Kajal Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...21 for any details. Yours sincerely, Kajal Desai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86320754717 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04427325968 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2644849672 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239666812835 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801636280203 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630354591488 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122132132272 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527148601488 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.