Your work in an international company. You need to take some time off work.
Write a letter to your employer. In your letter
Explain why you need this time off
give details of when you want the time off
say who can do your work when you are away
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Smith,
I hope this serves you well. Since our international foundation is serious to appoint off days a week earlier As it’s 50th anniversary of my parents all the children are going to gather together and make a party I need some off days .
Let me explain you in details, From the last year my father passed that chronic illness. He had turned to a disappointed elder and whole the family were worry about him, further we decided to make a surprise plan.
so, as you are aware I’m so far from them and I have to change two airplanes to get destination, Hence I need a week from 24th august to 30 august to spend some times with them.
Furthermore, Miss Keen who were trained by me about a couple months ago could be the best person to be in charge of my duties, even though I will do all the serious matters remotely. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Smith, I hope this serves you well. Since our i...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: Than
...ious to appoint off days a week earlier As it's 50th anniversary of my parent...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er and make a party I need some off days . Let me explain you in details, Fro...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...disappointed elder and whole the family were worry about him, further we decided to ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e decided to make a surprise plan. so, as you are aware I'm so far from ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62721893491 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54417034968 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710059171598 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0034178775 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190074847946 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799220484269 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463503174897 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865740843223 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309050768725 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.