Advantages of using computers.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs hasve a lot of advantages in using it such as conect to the internet, watch vi...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: SHORT_CUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcut'?
Suggestion: shortcut
...d. That are call PC and Laptop. Pc is a short cut of personal computer, it is used more o...
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Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
..., it is used more often in playing game in stead of working. Because pc is usually run smoo...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en in playing game in stead of working. Because pc is usually run smoothy than a laptop...
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Line 1, column 501, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...laptop. A laptop is also called as a lap , it usually use in work because it is ea...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...op is also called as a lap , it usually use in work because it is easy to bring wit...
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Line 1, column 745, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al, computer help people to face up with the technology , help people in working ...
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Line 1, column 761, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p people to face up with the technology , help people in working thing , help peo...
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Line 1, column 792, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...echnology , help people in working thing , help people to conect with friends easi...
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Line 1, column 836, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...elp people to conect with friends easily , it also make people fell relax when pla...
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Line 1, column 847, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...to conect with friends easily , it also make people fell relax when play games or wa...
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Line 1, column 919, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... games or watching video on the internet . So computer has many advantage that mak...
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Line 1, column 938, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...video on the internet . So computer has many advantage that make people and socialty improve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in general, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54237288136 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51398695681 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.4838682208 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134578924606 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522346741334 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607489655174 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134578924606 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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