Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development

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 Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, with advanced society, advertisements have a tendency to be more and more ubiquitous. From my point of view, this phenomenon could be both negative and positive developments.

On the one hand, Some positive sides could be attributable to this trend. Firstly, it helps customers to get accessibility to new products in easily way. For instance, when people want to figure out or buy a product. Instead of going to the shop, they just need at home and see advertisements on TV or social media about that product. It quite convenient for them to make a purchase without spending much time. Furthermore, as for companies, Advertisement is one of the best way for them to promote their newly release product to customers. For example, when Company A want to introduce cosmetic product to consumers, they have to create a viral video or write blogs via advertisements on TV or newspapers .It is considered as a way of helping them to approach potential customers.

On the other hand, the emergency in quantities of commercial ads exerts some negative impacts on people today. First of all, it makes people spoil their choice with wide ranges of different products were advertised. Somehow this enables them not to be well-formed about a certain product.Therefore they would not know how to choose a suitable or good product when having too much information loaded .Besides, it also spoils the flow of people when they keep track of information on phone which were interrupted by a kind of useless advertising. Case in point, like me, advertisements about games really drive me nuts when I am enjoying a wonderful film on Youtube.

In conclusion, From my perspective, it has equally both negative and positive effects on customers when advertisements are seem to become more and more prevalent than ever.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99344262295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05649396116 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8372667975 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172846176846 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643367224944 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974051646878 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163264975691 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131668353058 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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