Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
The expansion of advertisements in today’s society is becoming more and more of a topic of debate. Although there are clearly some negative impacts of this phenomenon on people’s life, I am of the opinion that advertisements produce a wide range of undeniable advantages.
The argument that advertising poses as a detrimental development is true to some extent. This could be explained by the fact that many companies today choose to create advertisements as a way to encourage consumerism among the masses. This is not to mention that many products are portrayed on screen as some must-haves in order to truly feel content with oneself. For example, there are ads targeting young women as well as teenage girls featuring models in glamorous clothing or fancy jewelry living their best lives. Often, these ads will convince them that in order to be like those models, they should at least wear what the models are wearing. As as result, a number of people will end up with purchases, which are not entirely required on a daily basis.
On the other hand, the idea that advertisements are becoming more and more common is attractive due to various reasons. The first reason for this is the fact that advertising has become increasingly fundamental in modern business, promoting the growth of the economy. This is because advertising acts as a medium between businesses and consumers, allowing more products of a particular business to become widely known by the public, which ultimately encourages its overall consumption. Another point worth mentioning is that by advertising, companies now have a drive to produce better quality products or services before presenting them to the public as well as being honest about them. This is due to the fact that consumers are now allowed access to a large variety of specific products or services from several companies. As a result, if companies provide consumers with untruthful information about their product's quality, it is obvious that they will eventually be given the cold shoulder, which will affect greatly their chances of survival in today’s extremely competitive market.
To conclude, while there are clearly drawbacks regarding the negative impacts of advertising, it seems to me that the advantages of this notion are far more significant. It can be predicted that advertising will engage even further in the public’s development in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: As
...least wear what the models are wearing. As as result, a number of people will end up ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, well, while, at least, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19948849105 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92337099005 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552429667519 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1024874591 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0625 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254360560011 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090257888932 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116172193266 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177741979289 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991480192768 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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