After high school graduation, students should take a vacation or a job for a year before they enter college. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether or not taking a gap year benefits students is considered as one of the most controversial issues nowadays. Although there is a school of thought that learners should continue taking university courses immediately after their graduation to save up time, I totally dissent with the idea. In my humble opinion, learners had better take a gap year in order to relax, remotivate themselves and take some part time jobs.
First and foremost, taking a gap year really helps student to wipe out their stress. In this break time, students don’t need to go to school and face with stressful academic program. Moreover, they can use this chance to take vacation which will effectively broaden their horizons, as well as pouring fresh air to their mind. Take my friend, Jack, as an example. While everyone in my class felt so lethargic to begin this school year, he was absolutely energetic and competitive at the beginning. To reply to everyone’s surprise, he said: “Had not I experienced the memorable trip to China, I would not have so much strength and motivation to start my new academic year like that.”
Secondly, it is considered as a conventional picture that when people need to make a big decision about what field to strictly follow in a four-year tertiary program , they really should spend some time to take a part time job which is related to their options. After a short trial, they will have a closer career’s understanding and be able to check which occupation is a ultimate choice for them. Lucky enough, I also experienced in the same situation once. After high school graduation, I took an academic break and worked as a teacher assistant. Then I met Shanny, who was my supervisor, and learnt lots of valuable things from him. He taught me many tips to manage the class, to let your students understand the lessons clearly, etc. I was totally inspired and finally I decided to become a student of University of Pedagogy.
To recapitulate, it is clear that people who intelligently choose to travel or take part time job before they enter college have more chances to build up motivation and experience for their long term goals. Therefore, I wholeheartedly believe taking 1-year school break is an ideal choice for anyone who strive for their slashing triumph in both academics and life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95419847328 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81922577336 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58524173028 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.7431724358 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277302588141 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816214577722 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471049561878 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169982580917 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268395663246 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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