Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniable fact that in today's world of competition job requirements is necessary to survive on an earth by masses and to earn bread and butter for themselves and for their family too. Higher earnings is much more momentous than work gratification. However, I believe that both of the conditions are equally important to each other.
First of all, big salary is much more significant than the employment satisfaction because when the individual get more wages for his work done then he may obviously get more satisfaction. Folks are able to earn more and more money for their basic needs and they also be capable to get a higher standard of livings. A good paradigm to mention here is according to an article in a newspaper 60% of the people in a society enjoys their high pays. Thus myriad amount of remuneration is required for the society's people.
On the contrary, fulfilling a desire regarding the employment plays a pivotal role in the life of an employee because if the individual is not satisfied from his work done then he may get more depressed during his employment. There may be a chances that the worker can not work accordingly to the terms and conditions laid before him. It might also be a possible circumstance arise that an individual working in a company produce least number of products. A mention worthy example to cite over here is that my neighborhood friend got a job in a company but the company's environment is not healthy and conducive for her. Although she get a high salary but due to some situations she leaves a job because of job dissatisfaction.
In a nutshell, from my point of view both of the conditions higher wages as well as job gratification plays a crucial role in the particular folks life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
...le in a society enjoys their high pays. Thus myriad amount of remuneration is requir...
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Suggestion: a chance; chances
...sed during his employment. There may be a chances that the worker can not work accordingl...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'produce the least'.
Suggestion: produce the least
...that an individual working in a company produce least number of products. A mention worthy ex...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...thy and conducive for her. Although she get a high salary but due to some situation...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...iew both of the conditions higher wages as well as job gratification plays a crucial role ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
... plays a crucial role in the particular folks life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, well, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73114754098 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8818422547 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0982857513 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18414211555 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621063751217 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752901549347 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104825507512 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545986698749 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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