Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
As being parents, taking good care of offspring is likely to be the top priority in their lives. For this reason, it is suggested that parenting courses should be mandatory to help them become successful fathers and mothers. While these classes can be beneficial to some extent, I dissent from the idea that they should be compulsory.
To begin with, it is undeniable that parents might reap several benefits from parenting classes. Firstly, raising a child is a challenging job that requires various skills to ensure children’s mental and physical development. Therefore, attending these classes could help parents acquire some necessary parental skills to teach their children and deal with problems more effectively since these courses are usually covered by experts with related in-depth knowledge and experience. Additionally, training courses help parents to become better models for their kids. Parents are, intentionally or unintentionally, the models that children are likely to follow. If parents are well-mannered ones, they can show their kids moral lessons to become kind persons in the future.
Despite the aforementioned upsides, it is impractical to force people to join these training courses. First and foremost, not all parents are able to be financially stable, in fact, many have to work overtime to make ends meet. As a consequence, forcing them to attend these courses would adversely affect their work and their normal lives. Moreover, mothers and fathers have been raising children without any formal help or official interference for thousands of years because they can learn from their family members, friends, neighbours, and books. These sources are certainly more economical when merely costing an insignificant amount of money compared to those training classes.
In conclusion, although the advantages of parenthood preparation courses are indisputable, they should not be a requirement for everyone to become good fathers and mothers. Instead of that, these kinds of lessons should be broadcasted on television or radio so that they could easier reach more people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49386503067 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84737435947 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7226433384 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299912247837 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909967619049 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761064720049 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192355187874 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830248087192 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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