Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions
Our world improve to make inhabitants life better, though, children nowadays are not fit and healthy as they should be. In this essay, i will present my opinion that what are leading to this problem and how to figure it out.
To begin with, young generation are depending too much on their parents. In the past, children have to made their own meal, find the ingredients by self during that time they spend their time outside the door, help their parents working not always laying in the bed. With the development time, our world these day it is not miserable combined with the past. Currently, children are helped by the housekeeper, their parents and even by money their parents have left back. If kids hungry they just need to pick up the phone, or tell their parent. The crucial role is the develop technology, helping us so much so that we do not need to do anything. Naturally, kids love electrical devices, they can spend all days to laid down and play computer games.
Although, this situation seemed to be hard handle, but if their parents spend a little time to prepare the nutrition meals, fabricate exercise schedule and limit the time for children using computer it can lead to another consequent. Doing this day by day formed the children habits and make their life healthiness.
In conclusion, due to the busy life of adult it is affected children hobbies. If the parents can organize the healthy life combined with the path of technology transformation children can get fit and health much more than the children in the previous years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77037037037 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45125034582 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0888579652 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163280556137 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600410652448 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044982003432 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115143590211 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326140504636 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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