Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communication information. State which you consider to be the most effetctive. Comics books radio television film theartre
As a result of the development of human beings’ technology, people have an increasing ways of interacting with each other. Communication tools vary from books invented by ancient Chinese people to television which only has been in fashion for decades. In this essay, I will interprete three media’s both advantages and disadvantages.
Firs of all, my most concern is books. I find it relatively easier for readers to learn some new things such as theory or knowledge. This is because the author of a book usually write it enthusiastically and with logic thinking. As long as the learners keep pace with the writer’s thought, it is no longer difficult to undersatand the new information.Another advantage of book is that it is more likely for learners to note down something especiall, as well as giving some complementary comments. However, there is no doubt that a book’s disadvantage is lack of vivid images.
The second media I would like to talk is television which ows a lot of merits. In my opinion, TV is a mix blessing. Just like other up-to-state electronic products, the colorful screen is the most appeal to people. With high quality of sound effect and bright gergious videos, many people, especially young children, are glued to it for too long. The merit of this phenomenon is that people are more aware of communicating in the way that TV did. Besides, the spread of information has become more efficiently. Instead, this is one of the demerits of televisions when a person migth expode too much information in a short time, which leads to lack thinking deeply.
Radio is the last option I would disscuss. Radio is another different input path, when comparing it to books. Radio affect audience via audio and the communication is determined by the host’s sound quality. The undeniable point for people is that listening radio does not put humper on doing other activity like driving, reading and do so forth.
In conclusion, the three media mentioned above all contribute to human race’s interaction. It is not correct to deleberately magnify one’s advatange and to avoid mentioning its disadvantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, second, so, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13314447592 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1391783464 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611898016997 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3760157334 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233989905866 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568956650121 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389544145928 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11215101156 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399507216798 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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