Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is undeniable that competitiveness is one of the important qualification for people in most societies. In this essay, I will examine both positive and negative impacts of competitiveness in an individual level.
Competitiveness give a rise to various benefits to people. First and foremost, it enhances self-development in each persons. This is caused by a pressure to overcome the obstacles and their competitors. As a result, competitive people always dedicate themselves in learning and doing some practices for improving their skills to compete other people. Another point is that it could create a higher job opportunities and educational opportunities from their ambitions. A strong intention to be better than others drives these people in hard working as well as studying. Accordingly, these people might be more outstanding than other people and may be promoted more quickly than others.
On the other hand, there are several negative effects from being competitive. For one thing, stress from competitiveness affects to people’s health and mental problem. This is because there are many researches showing that a high level of pressure give a rise to many diseases. What is more, people with high competitiveness tends to have no trust in other people. Seeing that they tend to position others as their competitors, there are no real friends in their life leading to severe problems in living with other people as well as happiness in their life.
In conclusion, there are both positive and negative effects of competitiveness to each people. However, I encourage people to have competitiveness in some certain level which its pressure can not harm to their health and their social life as the exceeded level of competitiveness could lead to negative trend rather than positive side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, for one thing, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19139609684 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6316347916 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32089614892 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111473777033 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102529100987 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246810239976 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120285239028 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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