Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
It is agrued that individuals are faced with increasing number of advertisements from rivaling companies. The following essay will analyse the mainly influence of this epidemic and then discuss the possible solution of this phenemenon.
From my point of view, the foremost effect of this problem are bad quality of production and widing the socioeconomic. First of all, not only does the production are different from advertisements which have harmful affection for the adolesence immune systerm, but also numerous managers of large business take advantage from the investment for their own profits. Demerits influence will be led by this action to the young generation. Morover, in the international world and with the appearence of new innovation that a various of population have been replace by modern technology such as automatic robots, so the classes diffent are more comomplace in the modern era. To illuatrate, about 5 perenct of the adults individuals in europian nation have become umemployment and homeless.
The possible measures for this trouble are appropriate law and rising the revenue of each advertisement. The disadvantage production should be ban or forbiden by the government, improving the nation development. Moreover, the manager of great companies will be more concentrate on reality, practical and benefits of the production when increase the advertisement revenue. For instance, there was a vurvey by Bobby Charten, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of Asian countries where just have a few advertisement. The statistic showed that nearly every nation has got a plenty of achevement in their economic background.
To conclude, this phenomenon is hugely dangerous for the individual life and society. It is mainly results in bad quality of production and widing the socioeconomic and possible solution is appropriate law and rising the revenue of each advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48484848485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14727116469 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9397596293 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127563284758 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470812464075 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700128434234 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823790360357 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603050045499 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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