The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
The rising of global population has been considered as a continuing controversy at the contemporary era. On this essay, I will explain the causes and effects. Also, I will state some examples and solutions.
It is certainly true that there are some people in a society that are unaware of the proper family planning. This is because people who was not able to attend any education are not able to comprehend the importance of having a small family. In addition, illiterates are also used in the traditional setting and the contemporary methods brought by the modern society does not reach them because they are more influenced by their beliefs and traditions. Moreover, teen pregnancy has been one of the major issue face by a country. Due to pre-marital sex, it leads to unexpected pregnancy which is also one of the numerous cause of over population. This is because, sex education is not being promulgated to universities and districts. As a result, curiosity of the youth made them to try out and experience without proper understanding of the effect.
On the other hand, there should be an imposed reproductive health bill to a country that regularly disseminates reproductive information to the society. This is because, with proper understanding of the cause and effect, citizens will be knowledgeable and acknowledge the importance of planning a better future for their off springs. Let us set the Philippines for an example, if the government imposed a bill concerning population, individuals will lawfully abide. However, these laws that will be implemented are inevitable to be disagreed by the catholic religion. Because, such rules may require legal medical abortion.
In my own opinion, I would say that it is absolutely imperative to control a growing population. I believe that the government can find alternative ways aside from abortion to prevent political disagreements. I recommend that once the bill has been imposed, family planning should be exclusively disseminated to the whole nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208913649025 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.16991643454 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103064066852 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529247910864 0.0501214627716 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041782729805 0.0437548338989 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100278551532 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0473537604457 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11240161081 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033426183844 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00278551532033 0.00163938923432 170% => OK
Determiners: 0.116991643454 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278551532033 0.021408717616 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139275766017 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2021.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21846153846 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378461538462 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316923076923 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181538461538 0.137316102897 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11240161081 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581538461538 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.5605648286 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0555555556 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8952667127 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.7478632479 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.34736842105 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407896355861 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0896811994451 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0584979633336 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488540751942 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104737796983 0.148594505496 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156676900933 0.134430193775 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739305417065 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324847031155 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0475591255362 0.0638462369009 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279558629355 0.228012699653 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495788366584 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 80.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9