Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
̱̱✆Mr Beck✵™:
There are several type of viruses in our world but one undiscovered virus called Coronavirus which was first occurred in Wuhan located in China is becoming huge challenge all over the world meanwhile Covid 19 overcoming environmental problems including air pollution, water pollution. Detailed points about both views will be mentioned within the scope of my essay.
After occurring in 2019 on 31 th of December in China , it spread to 167 countries and became pandemic. According to the World Health Organizations' latest news, over 300000 people had infected and approximately 13000 of them have died from Covid -19 in the world. As a consequence, Covid -19 is bringing drawbacks to the economics of countries as they cannot export ,import goods because of closing to all countries in incubation period. For instances, it is explicitly proved that
China lost 1 trillion dollars in fighting against with Coronovirus.
Incubation period cause reducing the amount of waste sent to landfills. The percentage of air pollution decreased dramatically into a month.
On the whole, in spite of becoming pandemic of this virus we aren't afraid of Covid-19 as Allah always with us, and treatment will find soon .
Imomova Sayyora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne undiscovered virus called Coronavirus which was first occurred in Wuhan locate...
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...ng in 2019 on 31 th of December in China , it spread to 167 countries and became p...
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...pandemic. According to the World Health Organizations latest news, over 300000 people had infected a...
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...n the world. As a consequence, Covid -19 is bringing drawbacks to the economics ...
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...nce, Covid -19 is bringing drawbacks to the economics of countries as they canno...
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...omics of countries as they cannot export ,import goods because of closing to all c...
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...ies in incubation period. For instances, it is explicitly proved that China los...
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...ved that China lost 1 trillion dollars in fighting against with Coronovirus. ...
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...t with Coronovirus. Incubation period cause reducing the amount of waste sent...
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...riod cause reducing the amount of waste sent to landfills. The percentage of air...
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...spite of becoming pandemic of this virus we arent afraid of Covid-19 as Allah a...
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... this virus we arent afraid of Covid-19 as Allah always with us, and treatment ...
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...s virus we arent afraid of Covid-19 as Allah always with us, and treatment will...
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...ys with us, and treatment will find soon . Imomova Sayyora
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... us, and treatment will find soon . Imomova Sayyora
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, while, for instance, in spite of, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34848484848 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90702167175 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732323232323 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4915681628 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132469213492 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392993876632 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034656818069 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487327676651 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417291272634 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.